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Never Fall For The Enemy by ~keiyachan:iconkeiyachan:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


     Extreme pleasure
In ones own sadistic desires
Engulf the blood drops
Falling from Heaven
Seek revenger on a anger
Consuming its host
Giving a great power
Of unsatisfied hunger
No one falls from Heaven
All that is of ill is slaughtered
In gods name
Redemption is unnecessary
We are all banished from the gates
That are said to bring peace
Live or die make your choice
©2007-2008 ~keiyachan
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Corruption of society reduces to morals to nothing then dead shells

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~Tyros:iconTyros: Jan 9, 2008, 11:09:11 AM
Interesting... it's got a very apocalyptic feel to it. The rhythm is pretty well done most of the way through - the short sentences seeming to be drummed out rapidly. The longer ones sort of mess with the rhythm a bit in my opinion, but it's still pretty cool anyway, amiga. n.n

Sorry 'bout the delay... I've been away for a while and am now catching up. XD;

- Tyros

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In loving memory of Jean Marie Lampman: Among other things, a wonderful grandmother.
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